The use of the different shades of green is good. Creative way to use what appears to be leaves to separate the topics. Although in my opinion the text is a bit small when you have more than enough space that can be filled.
The feedback you received during your presentation included "spoon" shaped Sage leaves - and I have just picked some for you. I can't promise that the sprigs will be alive in 1 week, but I'll bring them in if they are. Meanwhile, I realize that you could flip them vertically and they would probably stop resembling spoons! Also, I suggest you reduce the leaves along with the taglines to create a more solidified text block that doesn't challenge the fist for prominence. After all... this cover is really all about the masthead and fist isn't it? Taglines are very much secondary items.
The use of the different shades of green is good. Creative way to use what appears to be leaves to separate the topics. Although in my opinion the text is a bit small when you have more than enough space that can be filled.
ReplyDeleteThe feedback you received during your presentation included "spoon" shaped Sage leaves - and I have just picked some for you. I can't promise that the sprigs will be alive in 1 week, but I'll bring them in if they are. Meanwhile, I realize that you could flip them vertically and they would probably stop resembling spoons! Also, I suggest you reduce the leaves along with the taglines to create a more solidified text block that doesn't challenge the fist for prominence. After all... this cover is really all about the masthead and fist isn't it? Taglines are very much secondary items.
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