You may not be able to read so this is what it says on the bottom
"The taste and freshness is still the same, but our new designed bottles are even better for the on-the-go gal. Whether you’re running around or finally taking a moment for yourself, you can always depend on the goodness inside each of our drinks."
Amanda - is there a bit of a readability problem with the title? Also - I suggest you add some copy about the healthy, organically-grown fruit with no preservatives that this drink should contain... which would help tie this advertiser into the content, and explain why they might want to advertise in this mag.
ReplyDeletethe typeface for this ad is really hard to read along with the color that was used with it. I'd experiment more with type faces and color schemes.
ReplyDeleteI agreen with both Coni and Torri. The white text is an issue. Maybe a tint of the color of the grapes so that its not white, but it still stands out from the background image. Just a thought. Maybe also adding additional info like a website or something or a fallow us on these social medias.
ReplyDeleteDo I need to say that I agree with everyone else?
ReplyDeleteYou've got a great concept here. The big image with the text residing in the tilt shift looks great. The bottle on the bottom feels odd, as if it's floating. This may just be me though.