Torri - This paid ad would need to also include a website so that people in any city could learn where the farmer's markets are held. Keep in mind that this is a national magazine... so people in Chicago would be reading it, along with people in Boston. I suggest your copy be something like this:
Visit the Farm! Take a trip to your local farmer's market.
No matter where you live in the USA, visit www.FarmersMarkets.org for up-to-date information about where and when you can find fresh, organic, non-GMO foods grown in your own area.
Layout: The heading has a nice typographically strong approach. I've suggested, above, that you add some words, so some changes are bound to happen. I suggest you enlarge the new headline and make sure it fits comfortably in the space is which it sits.
After you have designed a clever heading, add the body copy in such a way as to share some kind of alignment with the heading... so both text blocks have a relationship. Currently, they pay very little attention to each other on the page. In fact, with the 2 bottom lines being FL and FR... these items really pull away from each other rather than visually work together.
Torri - This paid ad would need to also include a website so that people in any city could learn where the farmer's markets are held. Keep in mind that this is a national magazine... so people in Chicago would be reading it, along with people in Boston. I suggest your copy be something like this:
ReplyDeleteVisit the Farm! Take a trip to your local farmer's market.
No matter where you live in the USA, visit www.FarmersMarkets.org for up-to-date information about where and when you can find fresh, organic, non-GMO foods grown in your own area.
Layout: The heading has a nice typographically strong approach. I've suggested, above, that you add some words, so some changes are bound to happen. I suggest you enlarge the new headline and make sure it fits comfortably in the space is which it sits.
After you have designed a clever heading, add the body copy in such a way as to share some kind of alignment with the heading... so both text blocks have a relationship. Currently, they pay very little attention to each other on the page. In fact, with the 2 bottom lines being FL and FR... these items really pull away from each other rather than visually work together.
Good beginning.