So I wasn't sure of what to do for these so I used a yoga studio I made up and a piece I am doing on sustainable living for another class I am taking because I thought that it fit well within the perimeters of what my magazine is about. Please let give me honest opinions and as many as possible.
Ruby - both of these will work just fine in the magazine I think.
ReplyDeleteIn terms of the layout for the Yoga Studio - I would recommend that you allow the photo to move up behind the type and bleed off top edge rather than stop 2/3 of the way up the page. Add contact information, hours open, etc?
The Living Green PSA should probably make the website more visible, it may be too hidden for the reader. I assume the "call to action" is to visit the website - right?
the color scheme and overall flow of the information works really well together in the yoga studio ad. but you could have certain aspects of the design bleed off the edge of the page.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy what you have done with the Body/Mind ad. The type is carefully placed, and easy to read. That being said. I don't know how I noticed the QR code in the bottom left corner. It's very hard to see or even notice. I can see you were trying to make the code a little more discrete, but it's very hard to see. I would try adding a fill color or even a different color all together.
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