The gradient doesn't work well on a spread, if you want a colored background stick to light solid colors. I also don't think your masthead works for your audience; the typeface you choose is very old feeling, try going on to free font websites and look for some newer looking fonts. For your fitness page I think if you silhouette the girl doing yoga it work look better and put her straight.
Torri - I'll reserve my comments here for when we are sitting down together tomorrow before class.
ReplyDeleteThe gradient doesn't work well on a spread, if you want a colored background stick to light solid colors. I also don't think your masthead works for your audience; the typeface you choose is very old feeling, try going on to free font websites and look for some newer looking fonts. For your fitness page I think if you silhouette the girl doing yoga it work look better and put her straight.
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